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TG: so what kinda sick fires can you throw down
AT: wELL UH,,,
AT: iM PRETTY GOOD,
AT: aT SICK FIRES,
AT: yOU KNOW,,
TG: lets see it
AT: oH UH,,
AT: lIKE RIGHT NOW,
TG: yeah
AT: wANT ME TO JUST UH,, sTART,
TG: yeah.
AT: wELL UH,, bEWARE, hUMAN,
AT: i LEARNED FROM UH, tHE BEST,
AT: hERE i GO,
AT: *DEEP BREATH*
AT: oNCE UH, uPON A TIME,,
AT: i HAD THIS IDEA, oF COMMITING WHAT WOULD BE UH, a HUMAN CRIME,
AT: aND i ENDED UP DEAD,
AT: nECK SPLIT RIGHT UH, bELOW THE HEAD,
AT: aND THEN i FOUND THE UH, kING,
AT: wHO SHOWED ME HOW TO UH,,, tHROW DOWN IN THE RING,
AT: aND NOT UH, lIKE WRESTLING,
AT: bECAUSE HE SAID UH,, i WAS A BROKEN NESTLING,
AT: aND UH, tHAT IT WAS KINDA GAY,
AT: aND i JUST SAID OKAY,
TG: alright not bad
TG: though it's still still pretty sad
TG: your beats are still new
TG: far from legendary like zillyhoo
TG: but dont worry you still got time
TG: before youre as great as the master of ryme
AT: wELL SEE HERES THE UH, tHING,
AT: tHERE WAS SOMETHING,,, hE CALLED A FLING,
AT: aND IT MAKES IT UH, kINDA WEIRD,
AT: cONSIDERING IT WAS SOMETHING YOU ALL KINDA,,, fEARED,
AT: aBOUT THE COMMENT, tHE ONE ABOUT WHATS GAY,
AT: tURNS OUT SO ARE YOU, aFTER THE UH,,, fINAL SAY,
TG: okay that was pretty sweet i'll admit
TG: i'd say you're fires aren't all that fit
AT: }:/
TG: but they're still pretty healthy
TG: no way they'll get you wealthy
TG: see this heat that i got
TG: would be better off left to rot
AT: iN UH,, tHE WAYS OF RHYME i MAY NOT BE WISE,
AT: bUT AT LEAST IM NOT THE UH,, oNE WHO CAME OUT SAYING HE UH,, lIKED KISSING GUYS,
AT: aND FROM WHAT i CAN UH, sURMISE,
AT: yOU EVEN LIKE JUST GAZING INTO MY UH,, eYES,
AT: sO ID STOP WITH ALL THESE LIES,
AT: bECAUSE IVE SEEN BEHIND YOURE UH,,, dISGUISE,
TG: ouch that one kinda stung
TG: but with all the best raps, that was not among
TG: see if you stick to one subject
TG: then you'll be subject
TG: to getting bood out the stage
TG: so hurry up and turn the tide, page.
AT: aLL i KEEP HEARING IS UH, tALK MISTER,
AT: aND IT MAKES ME THINK THAT ALTERNATE DAVE WAS UH,,, pROBABLY A BETTER KISSER,
AT: bUT ILL KEEP HUMORING YOU,
AT: oNLY BECAUSE ME AND HIM ARE UH,,, tHROUGH,
AT: wHICH WASNT EVEN UH, mY FAULT AT ALL,
AT: i JUST KINDA HAD A FALL,
AT: aND ANYWAY MY KNEE GOT A CUT,
AT: bUT,
AT: uH,
AT: uM,
AT: i GUESS,
AT: aLL THAT MATTERS IS UH,,,
AT: hE,
AT: sTUCK IT UP MY BUTT,
TG: youre choking bro
TG: these beats are so slow
TG: you gotta do better than that
TG: to get a tip of my hat
AT: bUT THIS RAP MY UH,,, dEAR IS FAR FROM THROUGH
AT: i GUESS YOU HAVENT REALIZED IM UH,,, kINDA HITTING ON YOU,
AT: bUT THATS OK BECAUSE i CAN UH, jUST LET YOU KNOW,
AT: tHROUGH THE WORDS AND RHYME AND UH,, fLOW,
AT: i KNOW WHAT i WANT AND UH,,, hOW TO GET IT,
AT: iTS A YOUNG SWAG UH,, hUMAN, aLL TIGHT AND FIT,
TC: WhOa tAvBrO I GoTaA SaY HoLd oN A MiNuTe
TC: I KnOw yOu aLl uP AnD WoN It
TC: BuT I DoN'T ReAlLy gEt wHaT YoU'Re sAyIn
TC: ThIs sTiDeRs aBoUt nExT To sAtAn
TC: He;s bAd fOr yOu tAvRoS
TC: I'Ll sAy iT By tHe mIrThFuLl mEsSiAhS' gHoStS
AT: iTS NOT UH,,,
AT: tHAT i DONT LIKE YOU,
AT: wHY YOURE A SWELL GUY TOO,
AT: bUT dAVE JUST KINDA HAS THIS UH, aFFECT ON ME,
AT: aND WHEN i DIED i THOUGHT IT KINDA SET ME UH, fREE
AT: yOU JUST DONT KNOW WHAT HES LIKE,
AT: oR WHAT ITS LIKE WATCHING HIM WITH UH,, a MIC,
AT: i KNOW i LOVE YOU STILL,
AT: bUT WHEN HES AROUND MY IQ GETS UH,,, cLOSE TO NILL }:(
TG: toreador knows what he's sayin
TG: i'll have yu know im better than satan
TG: the lord of demons got nothing on this
TG: and though usually not a troll id kiss
AT: hEY,,,
AT: }:(
TG: id have to say hes not all that bad
TG: his beats arent yours quiet as sad
TC: Oh yOu dId nOt jUsT InSuLt mY FlOw
TC: I'Ll hAvE YoU KnOw
TC: ThIs sUbBjUgLaToRs gOt BeAtS aPlEaNtLy
TC: AlL ShOuLd bE In tHe HoSpItAl sO UnHeAlThY
TC: YoU WaTcH WhAt yOuR SaYiN StRiDeR
TC: Or i'lL AdD YoU To mY NeXt fIrE
AT: oH MY GOSH, gUYS PLEASE DONT FIGHT,,,
AT: iTS KINDA GETTING ME HOTTER THAN UH, a tEXAS NIGHT,
AT: aND i DONT THINK ITS REALLY FAIR,
AT: eVEN IF IM UH,,, a PRETTY CHOICE MARE,
AT: gAMZEE YOURE MY FRIEND AND UH,, dAVES JUST A LONER,
AT: sO JUST STOP BEFORE UH,,, i GET A BONER,
TC: ...
AT: ,,,
AT: iM SORRY THAT UH, wAS TOO FAR WASNT IT,
TG: yeah kinda
TC: No i dOnT ThInK So
AT: i JUST UH, dIDNT KNOW WHAT ELSE,
AT: rHYMED,
AT: tHERE,,,
TC: ...
TG: ...
AT: ,,,gAMZEE
AT: wHAT UH,,,
AT: aRE YOU,
AT: sAYING,,,
TC: ;o)
AT: }8|
This was ridiculously fun to make. Props to the other two!! I was Gamzee.
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OctoberMangen Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This made me laugh so hard, i swear you guys made a piece of art hear! were'd you learn to rap like that! XD
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Ryysta Jun 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Idk i just gave it a shot! This was so fantastic on so many levels. Both the Tav and Dave were magnificently in-character.
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